Thread:Billy Cope/@comment-5091911-20160414102616

We spoke a while back about adding sections for a character's involvement in a TV series. While I accept your intentions, the way you introduce the information I don't approve. Your short sentence paragraphs sound more like trivias. Plus you keep using the same beginning "In heading".

Example

 * In "A Royal Mess" Amber reveals that she can play the harp.
 * In "Tea For Too Many" Amber reveals that when it comes to parties she follows the phrase "Bigger is Better".

It looks unprofessional but works and sounds much better when combining contents into one long paragraph. With characters like Amber, James, and Roland they make a lot of appearances than any other character in the series. The best way of writing about their involvement in the series is what I've done on the Rebels character pages, combined episodes. It makes a page look more tidy and professional to read. However, Star Wars Rebels follows a strict timeline, while Sofia the First does not. There have been certain episodes that some people say put the show's time line out of place. 