Thread:Billy Cope/@comment-5091911-20151127214033/@comment-5091911-20151128131615

You don't need to keep capitalizing everything that applies to a title or the name of an object. We only bother with things like the names of characters. User:Lightening McQueen's changes are in the right, especially the others he has made.

You still need to try avoid mentioning dialogue all the time as well. There are other ways to describe character dialogue without actually mentioning as dialogue. You still intent to go "Sofia tells Hugo this, Hugo tells Sofia that", and "Sofia stating this" or "States that". Its something I can't clearly explain.