Thread:Billy Cope/@comment-5091911-20141129221858/@comment-5091911-20141130193325

I will be honest with you. The reason I undid your edits for "baby sister" because it does not work and neither does "younger sister". It does not sound out perfect when you read it out and it over does it. I am proud of your devosion to technical accuracy but it doesn't need to be that accurate, just perfect enough to read in a good pace. Also the terms "Baby" sounds unfriendly including the sentece you once wrote "Stabbed in the Back." using the terms "Baby" can be a tease or an insult, just because sofia is younger than Sofia doesn't mean she should always be called a baby and her younger sister, remember they are stepsisters but prefer calling each other "sisters."

I use to write books before I came here and when I started, I was very detailed in writing, but perhaps too detailed which made me see that I had to narrow things down a little so the pace would move and sound a lot better as you read it.

I revert of remove edits because sometimes I am unsasitfied with how it looks or because it doesn't work for me but it is the obession, sometimes in can get you and does for me on rare occasions. You see I've been editing the Sofia the articles for two years now and I've been doing my best to keep it perfect. I also have a strive for perfection and I can get carried away sometimes.