Thread:Alex2424121/@comment-1363034-20141206185100/@comment-5091911-20141207110111

Here let me show you something. I will display a sample of what you previously wrote in the The Floating Palace trivia and compare it with what I have changed.

Your Writing

 * Oona, in many ways, is similar to Sofia. Both are their kingdom's second princess and it's Royal Family's youngest member, both have mystical objects that give them powers, both can't use the magic in their magical objects to their fullpotential due to lack of training, both recieved their items from their kingdom's current ruler, and both are rarely taken seriously because of how young they are.

My Writing

 * Oona, in many ways, is similar to Sofia. Both are princess who are the youngest members of a Royal family and possess a mystical object given by their parents, which gives them magical powers.

Can you see the difference by reading these, while yours is in a way over specific and with your previous, larger written trivia you could easily get lost in the reading while mine is simple and only displays the basics in short notes that speak a thousand words.

We're all young adults on here or older, I'm nearly twenty-five years old and we're all smart enough to understand small written work, so there is no need for concern to be specific.