Thread:Billy Cope/@comment-5091911-20141222205014

There is also one important thing to remember and that is stay true to the seires


 * In "Four's a Crowd" There was never any mention of that Sofia, Jade and Ruby made their hand clap since the day they were little in the episode, That fact belongs to James and Amber's twin song.
 * In "The Flying Crown" Amber is not furious when Sofia tells her about Hugo, she is calm.

Also you don't need to keep including what emotions they are experiencing like "horrified" or "furious", reading the part about what is going on around the character explains it all. Most of all it doesn't sound right when you read it.

If you also wish to be more truthful to the plot you should research the episodes themselves. Also while you are at it you may notice a few things like easter eggs or goofs. Those online videos I showed you before will take you to all the episodes you need to study. 