Thread:Faioula/@comment-30529396-20170904192012/@comment-27956860-20170904193959

Okay, Llisten my suggestion about the plot now, what about something like the story brook? She could making a camping with her friends and as she is making a ride with her bicycle accsidently she pass into the magic invisible barrier that leands her into a unkow town that has everything a simple little restaurant that works a certain black man who works as a waiter and his name is Tian, A ice cream-maker who runs two princes called Elso and Ann, somewhere in the streets you can see a gypsy with his family working and he dancing to survive as also someowhere under the town is their home and hideout, there is a magnificent mansion in this town that remains a beautiful and evil man who is the owner of the largest and most fashionable fashion company in the Story brook. Also a cabbare that a very very famous and so sexy singer Jessie. In addition to this town there will be a big forest that becomes dark and more dark as someone goes in until will reach a long beautiful beach and the place that always is dressed in white snow. To this forest will leave Indians, many magic creatures and animals, a misterious green skin man who is very famous for his reather creep and beautiful look, and a man wizard with the name Mister Mim, to the beach it will be an other kind of people who live there and the son of their leader with the name moan and also more other of them. While she is in this unknown town she finds out that there isn't a way for her to get back to where she originally was on her own. She must seek the help of all the different men here to help her find a way to get back home. To get home she is supposed to gain the trust and love of all of them before she can go home. Once she does she is allowed one wish that she could use to get home or to stay in the town.