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Also, maybe fix it a bit so new paragraphs don't start at dialog from the same character speaking in the previous paragraph, new paragraphs starting with dialog begin when the next person speaks. Like, "As we speak, real heroes are already planning your demise" should be part of the previous paragraph coz it's Gamora talking in both.
 
Also, maybe fix it a bit so new paragraphs don't start at dialog from the same character speaking in the previous paragraph, new paragraphs starting with dialog begin when the next person speaks. Like, "As we speak, real heroes are already planning your demise" should be part of the previous paragraph coz it's Gamora talking in both.
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I'll probably be taking a break, just about to start Chapter 5, I'll try to remember that, but I bookmarked your story. Btw, a pony site says this kind of fanfic has a name: a "fix-it fanfic".

Latest revision as of 03:21, May 9, 2019

Yeah I read that bit at the end of the chapter. I'm on Chapter 4 now. I love the part about "a somber Thanos", since Thanos and Sombra both got their final deaths last month and their "main" ones were shown in a hologram or crystal ball again later, etc., and when King Sombra was first named, his name was initially mistaken for King Somber.

Also, maybe fix it a bit so new paragraphs don't start at dialog from the same character speaking in the previous paragraph, new paragraphs starting with dialog begin when the next person speaks. Like, "As we speak, real heroes are already planning your demise" should be part of the previous paragraph coz it's Gamora talking in both.

I'll probably be taking a break, just about to start Chapter 5, I'll try to remember that, but I bookmarked your story. Btw, a pony site says this kind of fanfic has a name: a "fix-it fanfic".

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